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  1. Date: 4/29/2010 8:12:00 PM

    Cool write, much is not seen from the outside. Thanks for your comments,( B.boy)

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 4:41:00 PM

    do you see how the same tittle draws me in, girl you need to post new poetry everyday or more often. I always comment my favorite box first, laters ,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 7:59:00 PM

    Thought provoking poem with a lot of depth. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 12:20:00 PM

    ALREADY READ THIS ONE. p.d.

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 8:45:00 PM

    You see here I am again. Look who is under. I like the fact that this is not about nature. A now a day look at haikus. I love this one. I will add to my favs as well. For the best haiku I have ever read . Except for the one in the movie (managenent)..

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 8:45:00 PM

    I like it . Today i learned a haiku . I will keep reading them. I will enjoy to read your poems.Adding you to my fav..poet..

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 1:47:00 PM

    That is an interesting poem, at first can be confusing, but read twice the far deeper inuendo becomes clear. Well done! Irish

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 10:50:00 AM

    I like that image still words. Did you mean views "past" them? Interesting write, sweet Lynette. Keep them coming so I can return comments to you. Well, my winter poem was SUPPOSED to be chilly and that is why it was. haha. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 5:49:00 AM

    Interesting last line..I could go different ways with it...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..The one about the missile in the cloud was where a jet left exhaust surrounded by clouds and it looked like what I have seen on tv that they say are missiles that are going to be fired...Sara

  1. Date: 3/25/2010 11:04:00 PM

    This is very moving, Lynette. We should never write anyone off. Love, Carolyn