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Tender Leaves

New born
Willow leaves
Long stems swaying
Swirling in the cold breeze
Today

Dark clouds
Allow few
Rays of sunlight
Penetrate through small holes
Gives hope

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  1. Date: 3/31/2010 10:41:00 PM

    A beautiful poem you have here, this one is going into my favorites...Raul

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 1:39:00 AM

    Nice one Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 2:00:00 PM

    Wonderful scene your words describe Sara >> James

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 4:03:00 PM

    enjoyed

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 6:51:00 AM

    This is truly beautiful Sara. I loved reading this piece. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 2:27:00 AM

    I like this, it speaks out and flows nicely

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 6:43:00 PM

    Luv your last line of gives hope.. nice to look at the tneder leaves and dark clouds and rays of sunlight as such... beautiful write full of imagery..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 3:33:00 PM

    i enjoy rainy clouds. i remember when my sister was born, it was sunny out. which explains why she is so bright. great poem. -Always&Forever Lynette