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F Sylvia E

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F Sylvia E

Just give up in comments you say.
A no talent  hack who creates attention.
But your bout to get re written in your traggic play.

A little kid hidding behind a name.
Just another loser.
In the poetry soup game. 

Hey it's over get the hint 
so why do ya call?
If ya dissapeared tommorow  no one would
miss your misrable butt at all.

Id read your comment but im to busy 
having something you dont a life.
Is it warm in hell?
Glad to know satan has a wife.

Now heres some facts you all may not know.
Are girl Sylvia has the personality of a board.
And the beauthy of a crack hoo.

You might be the mean girl in school.
Well Im the bully of block.
Making  the site go deaf from all the trash you talk.

Hide behind your screen cause im already 
at the door.
Here to deliver the verbal smackdown.
The queen of nothing just got knocked to the floor.

If you no whats good you'll just leave town.
With your  worthless comments.
Get the message Sylvia  you  cross dressing clown.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2010 12:55:00 PM
    I agree with Maria here, you guys are bringing yourselves down to her level, from what I have heard about her anyway. There were some funny lines in this poem of yours, however. By the same token, I have read one or two of her poems as well, and I can't say she is a bad writer like some of you are saying. Well, it's all a big mystery to me why she feels the need to ruffle so many feathers here! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 8:16:00 AM
    Although I have blocked her, many fine poets have suffered nasty remarks from her. She is becoming of woman if ill feeling for many. Bravo for having the courage to stand up to her, Tom. Best Wishes and welcome to Poetry Soup! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 7:27:00 AM
    your poem rocks..I have not had a nasty comment from her yet . I do reply 2 her insults..She is a funny person..I did comment on hers telling her I do not see anything readable in her poetry...Once again Enjoyed the read..

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 2:05:00 AM
    Youch! ?That ones meant to hurt! No one is perfect thogh, we are all on learning curve throughout our lives and all jounrey that path at differing times. Encouragement and advice is what is needed not words that snipe from anyone who thnks they know better! There are better ways of doing things, don't bring yourself down to same level, it's not worth the time spent on it! Kindest thoughts and thanks for your most welcome comments. Anna-Marie.