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If I am -- YOU are ( Part 4 )

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If I am -- YOU are ( Part 4 )

If I am a teardrop, on the petal of a Rose : YOU are “The Petal of a Rose”
You are the Dew that moisten My Lips, : You are the wind that Caresses Me

If I am a grain of the seasoning : SALT : You are the One ; I flow to
YOU are my tranquility as I watch the mountain brook, empty into the Pacific

If I am the Setting Sun, staring at the Coast, You are the One Kissing me Good Night 
YOU are the Warmth that my Heart seeks, You are my “ FOREVER “

                     TO MY FOREVER LOVE : " B A R B A R A "

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  1. Date: 3/27/2010 1:56:00 PM
    Awesome and heartbreakingly beautiful. Irish

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 1:13:00 PM
    Wow again! She must really move you to inspire this wonderful series. You more than "Rose to the Challenge you set for yourself.'' Thank you so much for reading my work. I don't know if I deserve such Praise. I struggle to write, looking for words; like a hungry Wolf looks for food. While you write as smoothly as a gentle summer breeze.

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 10:52:00 AM
    Great love and adoration write to Barbara...Keep the creative pen flowing... Sara

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 3:31:00 PM
    this is all so romantic(: especially the first parts. beautiful dedication. much love to you always. -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 7:32:00 AM
    thank you for part 4 in the series..lovely. If I an the goblet, you are the wine that fills me with color, both day and night. BG