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The Beginning

You touched my mind long before I saw you
I wandered in thoughts of you in dreams
Dreams became moments of desire
when your words opened up my world
You touched my heart long before I met you
I lost myself in your eyes, falling deep
into the blue pools of your passion
when your words beckoned me 
You touched my soul long before you touched me
I surrendered myself to a heaven
surreal in feelings you painted
when your words enwrapped my heart. 


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  1. Date: 9/7/2010 6:17:00 AM

    Wonderful poem!

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 7:48:00 AM

    i love it. amazing write. Thank you for your comments(:

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 8:38:00 AM

    Gulp ! what a lovely poem Alie, rich and inviting , thanks so much for your support Daniel

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 5:59:00 PM

    enjoyed reading!!! part of a poem I did---Swift, rushing, bubbling creek Flowing to the gulf, cycle of life Ebbing near with sounds of nature Check it out if you like:)