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leaving

she sits and thinks
as there worlds
start to split

the break has started
will it become a rift

she sits and thinks
as there worlds
start to split 

his mind has changed
no need for leaving

she sits and thinks
as there worlds 
start to split

she'll be doing her a favor
as they leave in a van

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  1. Date: 3/19/2010 12:08:00 PM

    Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration John. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 8:12:00 PM

    A very intresting poem. I have enjoyed the read...