Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

If I am -- YOU are (part 1)

HGarvey Daniel Esquire Avatar HGarvey Daniel Esquire - LIFETIME Premium Member HGarvey Daniel Esquire - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled If I am -- YOU are (part 1) which was written by poet HGarvey Daniel Esquire. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by HGarvey Daniel Esquire

Best Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poems

+ Fav Poet

If I am -- YOU are (part 1)

If I am a stonewall, YOU are the shim that makes me Whole
YOU are the root the glorious Bloom, I, the thorned stem of a  Rose

If I am the rising Sun, YOU are the Golden warmth around me
YOU are the illumination of Moonlight, I, just the twinkle of a star

If I am the waves of the ocean, YOU are the Loving Life with in
YOU are the Everlasting Love of my Heart, I, Forever Your Liege
  
                                 TO   BARBARA

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 3/31/2010 5:35:00 PM

    What a lovely tribute of love, the imagery touches the core of the reader. I am sure that your Barbara will love this marvelous declaration of love. I thank you HG for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always,Adell

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 1:01:00 PM

    Great Tribute to someone who Inspires These Lovely lines. l That is why your Poetry is so Great. Because they are from one who is Inspired.

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 12:13:00 AM

    this is a beautiful wave of emotions. "I, the thorned stem of a rose" thats a very sweet line.[SOUP MAIL] -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 1:15:00 PM

    Oh yes....she will love this! How sweet you are!! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 9:19:00 AM

    Excellent and sweet tribute to Barbara, HG! I'm a "hopeless romantic" so this definitely goes to my favs.! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 6:04:00 AM

    What a wonderful tribute to sweet Barbara, HG! Please tell her you've posted it; you'll make her day! Love you, Carolyn