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Flying with the Birds

As night crept softly into my room
My dreams began
to spin

I saw a flock of birds in flight
And I wondered where
they'd been

I Soon was lifted up with them
We soared above
the earth

We sailed beneath the fluffy clouds
And sang with joy
and mirth

We landed back upon the ground
where I stood among
the flock

They looked at me with curious eyes
Some, I think 
were shocked

But as the scene began to fade
It was I who
was amazed

For I had flown with the birds that day
I soared above
and gazed 

Yes! I had flown with the birds that day
And I could really see

I had flown with the birds that day
And I was really free

(for "I dreamed" contest)

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  1. Date: 4/4/2010 4:54:00 AM

    Fine images. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 4/3/2010 8:53:00 PM

    This was just wonderful. I really enjoy flying dreams and adding in the birds made it even cooler. Congratulations. Andrea

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 8:43:00 PM

    Congrats Steven on your winning poem in the I Dreamed contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy on your trip to the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 6:58:00 PM

    I used to dream I could fly and it was wonderful. Nice dream and poem. Joyce

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 4:56:00 AM

    Steven, I really liked this one...What a great dream and excellent presentation...Keep the gifted pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 1:34:00 PM

    Creative, nice use of imagery, and great structure. Best of luck in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 9:56:00 AM

    Your imagery in the poem is so beautiful. Keep on posting. Ernilando

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 12:43:00 PM

    If i were judging this beautifully simple poem would be a winner. Good work. BG

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 9:16:00 AM

    Good one Steven - Strong quirky kind of write - I like it a lot - Thanks for a fab share -:)