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Into The Wild

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Into The Wild

INTO THE WILD

I dreamed ......

An arboreal wandering into the wild
Creeping in narrow-leaved green herbage
Afraid to be mashed by other wolverine in riled
Their safe abode is now in siege

The rampage and stampede make a harsh noise
Joining the rumble will stumble to near death
Swiftly moving away intend to make ploys
Taking hold of strength and a grasp of pure breath

Chasing the weak and hear piercing shriek of pains
The fauna now in vain attempt to meet and regroup from maze
A lurking prowler just outside ready to take his aim
A Carnivore’s rendezvous dealing another round of faze

Forays refrain them from regression
Marsupial bearing young is watchful and vigilant
For a hostile entry, a swift run from apprehension
Saving the younglings and safely back to taiga so verdant

With balsam fir’s magical warming in winter and cooling summer
Tall trees get blown over osiers, shrubs and miniature spruce
Hear the wind swayed the trees gently just like a hummer
A walk to wet spongy forest ground that have a soft carpet of moss

A truly look of life into the wild is precarious
Feeding from flesh and a quench from trickling stream
Some nocturnal species tending to be gregarious
To survive in this biome is a short-lived dream




Previously posted in voicesnet.com poetrysite last 21 October 2009.

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  1. Date: 1/12/2011 5:30:00 PM

    Gosh,just when I think i have read all your poems, I stumble onto something I had not yet seen. This is most unusual. I see it was a "dream" Had you seen the movie, I think called Into the Wild? some great new vocab words in this one for me. I just loved the way you described the trees in stanza five. Great imagery. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 11:22:00 AM

    This is awesome. Visuals are amazing. Flow of words rock. keep it up, your really tallented. ~rainbow

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 8:23:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your dreammmmy poem today.I love the express yourself, when u wake up 2 know it is only a dream. LOVED IT

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 3:18:00 PM

    Well done. I like the near rhyme in verse 4. Thank you for your kind remarks. I appreciate it very much. Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 10:38:00 AM

    Good use of imagery to share this dream. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 8:56:00 AM

    Villarosa,--enjoyed today!!

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 6:06:00 PM

    Well written and scary as all get out for the poor victims eh? Good luck Noel in the contest. Thanks for your comments! _Robert