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  1. Date: 4/5/2010 4:37:00 PM
    Name drew me in . Read already enjoyed anyway.

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 4:49:00 PM
    ONce again, very beautiful thoughts. I would say this is between the first and the second ones I just saw for follwing haiku form, Deb. It's more visual than the one just above it, and I really like that. WEll, catch ya later, LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 7:08:00 AM
    reallya true original and thats a very good thing has a diffrent feel to it but i liked this one very much great haiku

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 7:19:00 PM
    Deep Haiku from u Oh teacher poetess.. thankxxx for the much appreciated and very intelligent comment on my specific poem ... your insight and maturity is well received and warmly welcomed.. luv.. Linda-Marie ... your best pupil to date!

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 4:41:00 PM
    Sounds like it could be in a horror movie until one gets to the last line. In times of destruction, other things often bloom. Insightful poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 10:26:00 AM
    Very now and in the moment. I'd like to what you mean by this, if you care to inform me. I can guess: The death of one stirs commotion and inspires many. Like the death of Micheal. or is it that so many popular and important people have been dying lately? is that the skeleton dawn?

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 9:52:00 AM
    VERY NICE WRITE LOVED IT FALESHIA

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 2:18:00 AM
    Nice thought...Raul

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 6:11:00 PM
    Enjoyed the read. It was just to creepy 4 me...

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 4:55:00 PM
    Another original piece, ....the unusual, which you are so good at writing! :)