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Loving life.

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Loving life.

Sewing beauty into the seam of
reality, perception of the soul is no
frivolity, filling each moment with conscious
thought, experience each colour the green grass
and the ruby of port, excepting others views will
only distort, that which is your own fruitful
thought, experience the iron which is
wrought, be aware of your own actions,
each experience is poetry in motion,
what’s your intention? To create or
destroy, reality is our toy,
to abuse or enjoy, becomes
irrelevant to greet experience
or become shy and coy, the 
wheel of life spinning like fire
poi!

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  1. Date: 4/5/2010 9:12:00 AM
    Well done and a lovely read. :) Thanks for all the kind comments too. Glad to see you.

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 10:32:00 PM
    I like this poem "Loving Life". We shouldn't get bog down by reality, it can always be changed. It is in our own hands. Our own thinking and emotions often dictate our life. If negative, they only attract more negativity, etc. Your poem made me think of this. Perhaps on an external aspect, you could cut your lines in the way that the rhymes are at the end. And then again, perhaps you wanted them at the beginning. Just an observation. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 4:22:00 PM
    life sure can be joyful or painful, great poem!

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 3:45:00 AM
    Lance thank you for your welcome comment today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 9:34:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading . Enjoying life I don't think so. Very well writen words, to go by...Irma