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Sandy Helps Dandy Randy

There was an old codger named Randy
He rolled on the beach and got sandy
It was there that he slept 
and remained so unkempt
But was sure that his life was so dandy.

Then along came a lady named Sandy
She wanted so much to help Randy
To soften his heart,
she played a big part,
But refused to give him some brandy

Now Randy began to awaken
And  realized that he was mistaken
He thought no one cared
Because no one dared
to approach him, and now he was shaken.

So then, he got up from his stupor
And started to become a good trooper
He began to help others
who didn’t have mothers
From then on his life was just super.

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  1. Date: 12/23/2012 11:29:00 PM

    XXXXXX,it

  1. Date: 7/20/2011 5:53:00 AM

    This was an amusing series of limericks. Much enjoyed and well done. I don't see any room or need for criticism. Rockman

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 6:19:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Susan. Love Carol

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:47:00 PM

    Congrats Susan on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 1:36:00 PM

    ah yes, lying on the beach with a bottle of brandy. You'd think he must hate Sandy. But no! She has been his life's angel. Great series of Limericks. I have trouble writing just one. congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:49:00 AM

    GREAT POEM SUSAN, HOW NOW? I HAVE NOT BEEN HEARING FROM YOU AGAIN, UNTIL NOW.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 3:07:00 AM

    congrads on being featured this week. T. S.

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 5:31:00 PM

    Congrats Susan on this fun write being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 8:19:00 AM

    This is a great story! I love it! Very nice is an understatement.

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 11:24:00 AM

    Very nice.....

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:50:00 AM

    You are one of my fav. poets and this is why. excellent limerick girlfriend

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 3:40:00 PM

    Very cool limerick series, Susan! Love the way Sandy managed to soften Randy's heart. Sometimes, all we need is knowing someone cares to turn our lives around. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 10:03:00 AM

    It is great when someone like Sandy can come along and change the life of Randy around. A great read. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 9:01:00 AM

    oops...I meant JOB..lol...am being exposed for the typo queen I am

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 9:00:00 AM

    This is one form I have yet to attempt let alone master but you have done a rollicking good jog here! in poetry, Dory

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 2:45:00 AM

    Hi Susan :) what an inspiring set of limericks this is---Randy sure is one lucky guy to be able to turn around his life like that thanks to Sandy ;) ---nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 7:47:00 AM

    these are excellent Susan, Harry

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 1:24:00 PM

    Great poem,good things come when you take the time to care.Thank you for your comments on mine. Sandra

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 3:51:00 AM

    Hey the rhyme is really good in this one. Thanks for your comments.

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 5:35:00 PM

    This has the makings of a good folk song. Just rread it aloud and you'll see what I'm sdaying. Thank you for your kind thoughts! Regards, Gerard

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 3:25:00 PM

    I love this style of poetry and enjoyed how you used it to share a story.

  1. Date: 7/1/2010 7:04:00 AM

    A very well expressed and appealing quartet of limerick poems, Susan, which together told a charming story as well. Carl.

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 5:41:00 PM

    Very nice work here! I loved the heart of the lady named Sandy, and so glad she wouldn't give him more brandy!

  1. Date: 6/24/2010 6:57:00 AM

    A cute limerick! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for reading my poems.

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 7:56:00 PM

    Beautiful message! Keep sharing your poems with us. Scott

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 7:57:00 AM

    this should be in a book on a shelf for it was just too darn cute thanks for sharing and for your kind comments on my your free poem that was one tough write in that style keep the pen flowing

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 3:26:00 PM

    Nice write! Keep it up. Dan C

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 6:43:00 AM

    This poem, too is super. Thanks for sharing. Great meter, great rhyme and terrific story. This was a fun and enjoyable read. Joe

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 1:44:00 PM

    very pleasant. something u'd find being said on an alice in wonderland cartoon tale. its lively and in harmony with the beat.

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