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So Raw

So rotten, so raw
Just ready to fall
A beat's keeping this corpse alive

So silent, so still
Somewhat at will
Just waiting for time to pass by

So coarse, so cold
Feelings so old
Things just don't seem to be right

So blank, so bland
Just don't understand
Why I'm stuck in this life


January 2010

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  1. Date: 2/6/2011 1:30:00 PM
    Been there...read my poem "time and a season"

  1. Date: 4/1/2010 2:21:00 PM
    Congrats on your featured poem this week on Soup.. wonderful choice to feature and share..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of PS

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 5:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Destiny. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 3:10:00 PM
    Despair is the killer of happiness....So don't

  1. Date: 3/12/2010 9:46:00 AM
    VERY NICE WRITE AND WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP THING WILL GET BETTER GOOD LUCK FALESHIA

  1. Date: 3/11/2010 9:02:00 PM
    A heart beat I read with your poem. I do love a poem with with the question u ask at the end...Why??? I'm stuck in life.. I my self can relate.....ENJOYED

  1. Date: 3/11/2010 5:36:00 PM
    well well well well then. me like.