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  1. Date: 4/1/2010 7:50:00 PM

    Congrats. well penned poem with good rhyming

  1. Date: 4/1/2010 6:12:00 PM

    Haaaaa! "Negative responses attached like the common cold." This has got to be the quote of all time, for everbody. The negativity of every situation, is like glue, while the positive runs off like water off a ducks back. So true Sami. Thanks so much for supporting my contest, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/1/2010 12:56:00 PM

    Congrats Sami on your winning poem in Moses contest.. an excellent write and special win for u to so enjoy.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/1/2010 11:45:00 AM

    Your writing never reflects "malnutritition," Sami. Wonderful, inspirational poem! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 5:55:00 PM

    Another strong write from you Sami. So glad you are here with your talents at PoetrySoup and I hope you never give up on us ... smile ... tomorrow is another day they say and so far, that works ... LOL ...

  1. Date: 3/9/2010 2:27:00 PM

    the search..the hunt..what's life all about if not for the journey! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/9/2010 9:47:00 AM

    Great poem! It flows very well. I really enjoyed the lines "lazy I be" very Walt Whitmanesk. -Mike

  1. Date: 3/9/2010 9:13:00 AM

    A powerful write as usual SammyBoy =) The faults of the world are slowly becoming a part of each and every one of us. Thank you for this lovely write and for always being there to read my work. You are one unique young man sami... Always, Farah

  1. Date: 3/8/2010 11:06:00 AM

    My dear Sami, Your amazing poems are always a joy to read. In this I feel you searching and I plead with you, to keep searching for the truth, as only the truth can set us free. Forgiveness and redemption are always there from Him if we only ask with sincerity. And when the road becomes too rocky, He will carry you. Thnx for your kind comments, Sami. Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 1:21:00 PM

    Sami, Sometimes, our surroundings, communities' traditions and expectations, inner soul, and life itself has so many pressures and distractions from peers, religions, politics. Pressures that can confuse Truth from God with man's ideas. It is difficult to KNOW. One can feel helplessly bombarded by evil influences. But I think that your last verse sums up salvation and righteousness. When the soul is open to God's rules and willing to follow, The self is lost and good grows within. Thanks.

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 11:17:00 AM

    Second stanza last line caught my eye...Hope that the negative really does not attach to you like a common cold...I hope that only positive thoughts and contacts will enter your life... ON my poem "DermaWhatologist"...was just for fun..I did have to go for a check up for I have had several pre-cancerous or one early stage cancer... The lady that sees me is not a doctor just a PA...She is really nice but the red hair,etc. describes her..She does use a freezing technique which hurts..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 9:41:00 AM

    just a bounce of rhythm with pouncing words. much enjoyed your poem and thanks for your comments. :D

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 8:39:00 AM

    Never give up..I know hope is the next step to fear..but without hope,fear is the closest step to death...Charma

  1. Date: 3/6/2010 7:42:00 PM

    Come on...never give up! : ) Exceptional write, Sami! Those images are fantastic. Ruben.