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"Someone You Once Knew"

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"Someone You Once Knew"

Flashes of moments,
  memories from my past.
     Thoughts of a time when I was 
         probably the happiest.

When we were all just friends 
   and we would always hangout.
      Before the truth in reality knowing 
         what the real world was truly about.

Before girlfriends and boyfriends, 
   lovers bickering and quarrels.
      Prior commitments and doubts, 
          our own hardships and sorrow.

Leaving the worrying for tomorrow, 
   that's what we used to do.
     That's just a vague recollection now, 
        like someone you once knew.

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  1. Date: 5/18/2010 6:50:00 PM

    Another great write, easy to relate to. So well written and rhymed. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your kind comments on mine. Caroline.

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 12:21:00 PM

    Nice one ! Most enjoyed, P.D.

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 9:49:00 AM

    I adore this. It flows so beautifully. And I def feel yah on this one. Always, Rain

  1. Date: 3/8/2010 10:21:00 AM

    nice flow to your words. Enjoyed the reading :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 9:00:00 PM

    Nice flow to this!

  1. Date: 3/6/2010 6:56:00 AM

    awww... good write... very true

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 6:38:00 PM

    memories from the past are always haunting. in happy and cold ways. you write of it well here great write. -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 9:32:00 PM

    INTERESTING ONE YOU WROTE HERE... THANKS FOR SHARING THAT TONIGHT