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About This Poem

Nature's Perfect Shake

Frosty, white, foaming
Rock and branch for stirring sticks
Nature’s perfect shake

Entry for Raul Moreno's Contest

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    daver austin
    Date: 12/19/2012 2:51:00 PM
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    Love the image. Congrats on the selection. daver
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 3/29/2010 8:49:00 AM
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    I can picture a kid playing with melted ice. Stirring it like a shake. P.d.
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    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 3/7/2010 12:13:00 PM
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    Congratulations Shawn, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/4/2010 1:51:00 PM
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    Loved thad middle line and congrats for being in the winners' circle. LUv, Andrea
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    john freeman
    Date: 3/4/2010 10:03:00 AM
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    A nice Honor mentioned, Shawn. Congratulations, AGape, Moses
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    Thomas Kurdyla
    Date: 3/4/2010 9:55:00 AM
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    Shawn, Yes! This is wonderful. I truly enjoyed it. Congrats, Tom
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    Marty Owens
    Date: 3/4/2010 7:43:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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    Caroline Cécile Delacroix
    Date: 3/3/2010 9:50:00 PM
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    So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.
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    Robert A. Dufresne
    Date: 3/3/2010 5:26:00 PM
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    I really like yoiur imaginative Haiku, Shawn. congratulations
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 3/3/2010 2:28:00 PM
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    Great adjectives in this haiku, Shawn!! Congratulations on your success in Raul's Contest. Ruben.
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    Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 3/3/2010 12:34:00 PM
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    Shawn, Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Blessings, Connie
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 3/3/2010 12:33:00 PM
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    My congratulations on your win in the contest, Shawn!! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey
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    James Fraser
    Date: 3/3/2010 11:35:00 AM
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    Shawn, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 3/3/2010 9:01:00 AM
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    What a delightful Haiku. Congratulations. Joyce
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 3/3/2010 5:50:00 AM
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    Congrats Shawn on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy with your beautiful Haiku.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 3/3/2010 3:31:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Shawn. Love,Carol
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/3/2010 1:46:00 AM
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    Shawn, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

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    Susan Palli
    Date: 2/28/2010 8:37:00 AM
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    good one!
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 2/27/2010 6:36:00 PM
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    I thought you were talking aout the quake.
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 2/27/2010 1:03:00 PM
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    Delightful haiku, Shawn! Can I have a sip? Nothing could be more satisfying than such a "perfect shake" from nature. Love, Carolyn
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    Jared Pickett
    Date: 2/27/2010 11:37:00 AM
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    Great job with this haiku my friend.... Nice....:JP]


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