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The Mermaids Ball .

The  mermaids  ball  music  still  lingers .

Swordfish  Fred  and his shoal  of  sweet singers

Had  a  whale  of  a  time

On  the octopus  slime

Caressed  by  their  salty  fish-fingers .




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  1. Date: 3/3/2010 9:57:00 PM

    Yes, indeed congrats on your win! Sean! Well deserved! How very perfect and musical indeed. A whale of a limerick! :) And thank you for your kind comments on mine today. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 9:27:00 AM

    Congrats on your win.....:JP]

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 10:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Sean. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 9:06:00 PM

    Dear Sean, My congratulations on your win in the contest! Thank you also for taking the time to read my poem and leave kind comments for me. Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 8:21:00 AM

    An Irish double Sean ,congrats.Only caught the highlights (or lowlights in your'e English) still till time for Johnno to get it right on the night.Glad you guy learnt the lesson of Cardiff and booted the ball into touch.Thought Wales gifted the game to the French.Happily did not catch the game in Italy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments.

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 5:39:00 AM

    I love it!! congrats on the winning poem!

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 3:51:00 AM

    Kool Limerick Sean, i am delighted for you being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 12:28:00 AM

    It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Sean, you swam to the top of the pond with your winning placement in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick contest. (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 11:45:00 PM

    Hey, you won!! awesome, Sean. I am glad to finally have seen your fine limerick employing great word play on those sea creatures! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 9:07:00 PM

    And might I congratulate you, Sean, on your win! You have a deft wat with the pen, as our ancestors would say. Good, solid job. And Thank you, too! Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 8:27:00 PM

    Wow! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Sea you!!! Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 6:53:00 PM

    Congrats Sean on your winning poem in the Limerick contest.. knew it was going to the winners circle first time I read it.. a terrific tale and a wonderful win for u to enjoy.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 6:22:00 PM

    This is so cute, Sean! Congratulations on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 6:20:00 PM

    Your so good at funny stuff( thats my immaturity showing).. Im so glad you got a win. Your biggest fan..BG I miss your footles...

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 3:33:00 PM

    Awesome ... hope this is for Carolyn's contest!! It is surely a winner ...

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 2:41:00 PM

    Another attempt! : )Soup mail.

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 12:09:00 PM

    ...And Soup Mail!

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 12:08:00 PM

    Oh, you too wrote about mermaids! : ) This form seems so easy for you... Good luck in the contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 7:58:00 AM

    Now now Sean,live and let live.They do make a mess though.Happily they are a sign that the weather is a-changing, in the garden this morning green shoots are on my early clematis,doubt if that applies to the economy in these hereparts.Have a good sporting weekend.We have the teenag grankids to stay.Bliss !.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 12:55:00 AM

    Bes wishes with this one Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & observations today.I doubt white will 'punch' ture the green.

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 5:35:00 PM

    Being Irish, I knew that you would produce a good one. You did. Original and concrete at the same time! Nicely turned. Thanks for your kindness. Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 12:02:00 PM

    Hilarious, hilarious, very clever Déirdre

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 11:54:00 AM

    You've got me chuckling with this one. I always can count on your humor to brighten my day. Keep on writing! Good luck in the contest. Karen

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 11:01:00 AM

    Sean, an absolutely smelly write. Just funning you my friend. Excellent entry for the contest. I wish you the best. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 8:12:00 AM

    Love it!! A witty contender!! Good luck Sean!! :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 8:06:00 AM

    Interesting form my friend.... Keep em' comin'.....:JP]

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 7:32:00 AM

    A limerick with humor I enjoyed reading your poem . This morning..Mermaids are excellent for any kind of contest..Thank uuu.4 your comment on my shark tale.....IRMA

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 5:44:00 AM

    Wonderful write Sean.. a cute Limerick for your entry into the contest.. your lines are full of witty humor.. still smiling.. a sure winner for u... thankxxx for your sweet comments on my poetry reads also.. very appreciated and encouraging ..luv.. "Sweetheart"... my entry is Mate Bait if u care to read... and smile ...