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  1. Date: 3/10/2010 3:09:00 PM
    Sounds like me when I am jogging.. just joking.. I love the repetition of words, I do this also in my poetry at times... you have soup mail.. Constance

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 7:06:00 AM
    No, it's pretty much a simple piece to recite in my head when I run; a motivater

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 6:45:00 AM
    Interesting write that seems like metaphorically written about something other than the run..Keep the creative pen flowing. My poem "Wild Open Woods" and "Robin Darts" are the same work just arranged differently...I did a syllable count on the "Wild Open Woods" and it was not suppose to rhyme. Thanks for stopping by and reading both of them. Sara

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 4:37:00 PM
    What a great rhythm you have here, Deneith. It sounds like a poem you could recite in your head as you keep the beat while running. Well done! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 6:58:00 AM
    Keep your pen flowing my friend... Good work...:JP]

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 6:53:00 AM
    would like to help!

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 5:57:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poem this morning. Very intresting. What are u running away from..IRMA