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An Attempt

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An Attempt

20 February 2010

An Attempt
By: Noel N. Villarosa


 
I thought, I will never propel on -------------------------------------- THIS
But perseverance jocundly push me to join what they called------- IS
HGarvey and Dane Ann new poetry is some ------------------------ WHAT
Meticulous and métier that never ------------------------------------- I’VE
Done before, but my mind hardly ------------------------------------ TRIED
Squeezing concepts to form what is needed ------------------------- TO
Satisfy the judge and outflank competitors on ---------------------- THIS
But I am sure everything must --------------------------------------- END
Not with a period but in a single -------------------------------------- LINE
Of congratulations to all who joined this contest of End line ------- WORD

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  1. Date: 6/1/2010 11:15:00 AM
    Nice job (:

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 4:06:00 AM
    Great idea for the competition. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 8:28:00 PM
    Looks great to me!

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 6:07:00 PM
    Another great end line word, Noel! Very well written. Good luck on the contest and thanks for your kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 2/20/2010 6:20:00 PM
    Dear Noel, WOW A Great Promo POEM for "End Line Word" Form If I know Dane this will definitely be in the Winner's Circle YOUR POETIC Mind is well worth reading and learning the Art YOU Excell my Friend YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 2/20/2010 4:54:00 PM
    What a clever take on the whole concept of this new form, Noel. You DID it and I wish you luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/20/2010 10:05:00 AM
    I think Dane Ann and HG will love your "end-line" poem, Noel. None of us ever tried it before and it was quite challenging. I really like the way you conclude yours by offering encouragement to all who attempt this form. Well done! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 10:05:00 PM
    Excellent Noel.. a perfect End Line Word poem to compliment the form ..Dane Ann and HG will be so happy ... this form is quickly catching on as u are now added to the ever growing list of poets utilizing form.. I have about 7 End Line Word poems posted too... unique and a great asset to the form ..luv.. Linda-Marie..