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Shooting Star

Light up my world
Take away the darkness
Show me to have some faith

Touch me softly
Hold me close
Kiss my lips with care
For when you do all of these things
We'll be the perfect pair

You came unseen into my life
I made a wish on you
And like a shooting star
You are coming true

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  1. Date: 5/1/2011 2:14:00 PM

    A nice poem to read. Well done.

  1. Date: 3/24/2010 5:12:00 PM

    Very nice rhyming verse...you have what's called slip rhyme or half rhyme...care/pair..you/true...Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 5:27:00 PM

    somebody found happiness. john

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 6:43:00 PM

    WOW! Sounds as if someone swept you off your feet. I felt your passion in your words. Great