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Vision

I see spectrums of contrast
Spectacular complements 
of pulsar blast
Rose fields that last and last
Beauty not even fiction can 
surpass
 
Dark eclipses elipt a cast
Freezing nights and warm grasps
Present past and future laughs
Rickashading smiles with only
One path
 
I see a universe in one
Where you are my sun
and meteors go on forever
As do the darkness of your eyes
 
As I explore you, each day's like
catching butterflies
The vastness of you has me mesmorized

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  1. Date: 11/21/2009 5:16:00 AM

    I find the last three lines especially enjoyable because we all are an awesome spirit being. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 11/17/2009 2:28:00 PM

    this beautiful poem is mesmerizingly beautiful..loved it--Charma