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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 6/3/2010 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x3 making it through the first round Sami. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Adeleke Adeite
Date: 6/3/2010 4:55:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are great.! love Leke
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/2/2010 3:54:00 AM
Congrats for the first cut in the contest
Date: 5/31/2010 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with three poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 5/31/2010 8:33:00 AM
Congrats Sami on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go my friend.. and check the list on hompage ..u have two more that made it also.. with luv from the "sweetheart"
Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/8/2010 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sara
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/8/2010 2:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Sami. Love, Carol
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 4/5/2010 7:34:00 AM
Congrats Sami on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to feature and share..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Janette Fisher
Date: 4/5/2010 7:19:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
Date: 4/4/2010 4:24:00 PM
Powerful way to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
James Fraser
Date: 4/4/2010 1:45:00 PM
Sami, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
Ernilando Tugaff
Date: 4/4/2010 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations my friend for being featured this week. Ernilando
Sue Mason
Date: 3/23/2010 5:52:00 PM
Interesting title ... who knows what it is going to take to "wake us up"? ... smile ... I liked the 60's better when the people took to the streets for justice and not for hate ... smile
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/7/2010 1:33:00 PM
Wow, Sami! Your words are intense and full of wisdom and apparent pain. Sometimes it is difficult to make sense of mankind. There are so many different philosophies that one who wants to be close to God might not be able to find the way. Greed, power, selfishness, and hatred are a few tools Satan uses to corrupt souls. Thankfully, there are those who walk differently, seek God more than things (Like TV). People who know people's feelings are more important than possessions. And God loves!
Ruben O.
Date: 3/7/2010 11:37:00 AM
You have brightened my Sunday morning with this incredible write, Sami. This line blew my head: "Spin my luck into the jaws of reality"...and the statement in closing line: "Reality’s sorrow is just fantasy’s nightmare"...just brilliant!! Awesome piece, Mr. Talent. Ruben.
Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/6/2010 3:22:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one....The last line would be a terrible reality. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my untitled write....It has been in the past that no one could read one that was untitled and I was working on that one and left it untitled so that I could finish if and when I got the time...So you read a work in progress...Sara
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 2/15/2010 11:21:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Sami. I enjoyed reading it. It has been awhile since you posted. Love, Carol
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/14/2010 1:40:00 PM
Fantasies death wish..this is hard indeed,,powerful words in this poem..and many verses of truth,Great write--Sami..Charma
Jessica Arteaga
Date: 2/14/2010 12:15:00 PM
so strong and heavy but still i can breath truth to your thought in this great poem