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True Love

No means to entice I try
Neither fret nor cry

Like a moth in crazy passion
On the candle of love I die

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  1. Date: 3/16/2012 3:23:00 PM

    Cute one...Got a chuckle..You may not have meant it as such but I know that many get involved with someone and are so wrapped up in them that they like the moth in crazy passion..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Many are going to cremation here for the price of a funeral, burial plot, and the cost a marker for the grave is very expensive.More people in the past had no means to mark their loved ones grave because people were very poor...Sara

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 11:57:00 PM

    this is very endearing the last line totally did it for me!

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 6:46:00 PM

    Thank you for your kind words. The "candle" is burning bright around the globe. Sometimes however it is hard as anything to see the flame. Nice poem. Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 7:48:00 PM

    What a powerful quatrain. I am a big fan of Omar Khayam - are you? Keep up the fine work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish