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Serene Mountain

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                          seeping sustenance
                                     mountain diaphoresis
                                                 herding boulders drink

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  1. Date: 11/11/2010 9:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Abe. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 5:10:00 AM

    Congrats Abe on having three poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest luv.. good luck in the next phase for all three luv..

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 7:19:00 AM

    "Diaphoresis?" Wow! Had to look it up. Great Haiku, Abe. Congrats on the selection. Dave

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 11:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/17/2010 3:35:00 PM

    congrat.Well deserved win..Abe..Charma

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 8:19:00 PM

    Wow, Abe! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Great work as usual. Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 12:51:00 PM

    Very descriptive haiku. I think you gave some life to the picture we were given to describe. I definitely like your last line. Congratulations on your fourth place finish.

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 12:21:00 AM

    Congrats on your recent contest success Abe.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 12:39:00 PM

    congrats on the win!! love it!

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 6:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Abe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 5:47:00 AM

    Congrats Abe on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a wonderful Haiku to express the photo.. enjoyed ..luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 4:53:00 AM

    Congratulations Abe on a wonderful write and win. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 11:08:00 PM

    Original..and Serene are these words indeed..Charma

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 10:25:00 PM

    Abe, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 10:13:00 PM

    Nice Haiku - it would be good for the Sunrise contest.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 8:19:00 PM

    my guess for the contest obvious winner this great haiku

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 8:15:00 PM

    A wonderful Haiku and good luck if for Raul's new Sunrise contest.. very visual and magnificent words Abe.. my entry is Panorama.. luv.. Linda-Marie..