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hate dad

i hate mom,
i hate dad more,
dad met mom
and thought he'd score
mom was desprete,
dad was a whore,
they got married, 
and my heart, it tore.

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  1. Date: 9/3/2010 10:30:00 AM

    can feel the anguish

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 12:59:00 PM

    short not sweet can feel the anger and pain in this ...good piece...Allie

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 8:22:00 PM

    Hello bree. Well im super glad you didnt actuallly leave.Had me going with that "im done' poem haha. And i love the comments!! Thankyou soo much!! read my latest one hope you dont mind the mentioning of your name in it. oh and btw before i forgeet i like your write in this one its very angsty and real.