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Dandelion Wishing

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Dandelion Wishing

Recollections waft
across my mind like
wisps of soft white spores - 
the vague remnants of
my memory’s threads.

Spring’s sun-gold heads
I now can‘t hold!
But glimpsing them,
I can recall. . ..

a young girl
blowing fluff
and wishing

time would
quickly 

pass.

For Brian Strand's
UP TO FIFTEEN any form/any theme max 15 lines Poetry Contest
for Cate Lindsey's What the Hex contest

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  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:00:00 PM
    Another WOW A.D. But you are that child at heart or writing this, well...and we wish now that time would more slowly pass. Tell more tomorrow. Won Again! Craig

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:32:00 PM
    congrats Andrea on a great first place win luv..

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:05:00 PM
    Another great write Andrea...when will the book come out? :) Jon

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 10:35:00 AM
    Remember it well. I also used to like to fluff the cat a nine tails. Hadn't thought about that for a while. Don't know if you had those in IowA. Thanks. And congratulations

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 7:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 5:24:00 AM
    An excellent write on sweet memories.Congrats Andrea on your win.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 5:24:00 AM
    A Fav!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:01:00 AM
    Congratulations Andrea (Catching up from a week away) x

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:08:00 AM
    sweetest of cheers to you for the top win, andie! .. glad to share the spot with ya!... congrats ; so crisp a write!:)huggs!

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 1:22:00 PM
    Wonderful write!This form is very interesting!-kashinath

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 3:03:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 7:53:00 PM
    A lovey expression of the treasured past Andrea you write supremely well, oh by the way Eileen was a co worker that collected anything frogs so one day I thought it would be nice to add a custom poem to her collection =)

  1. Date: 2/16/2010 1:23:00 AM
    This is just beautiful Andrea--it brings out such nostalgic feelings--your first stanza is just filled with wonderful imagery, actually your whole poem oozes with it--I know this will be in the winners list--hehe it's better be ;)

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 10:12:00 PM
    Great Dim. Hex, Andrea. Your wish came true, time does pass quickly. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 3:52:00 PM
    Dear Andrea, My Wife LENORE was The Great POETESS that Wrote a very Similar POEM and JUST as Beautiful as YOUR Expressed POETIC ART in this Superb Write YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 12:23:00 PM
    Hi Andrea, I have been under the impression that you are allowed to enter a contest and later, within the contest period, change it to something better. A note to the sponsor would be helpful, though. Especially if they have already read your poem and filed it into a judging category. I have changed poems in the past. I think I even placed with one, too. Good luck. You are right. The contests are going very fast! Take care, Andrea. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 11:50:00 AM
    Remember the song "Dandelion" by the Rolling Stones? That is what your poem reminded me of. Fine work - and a new form on me! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 7:36:00 AM
    Great write on a tough form. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 7:36:00 AM
    Great write on a tough form. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 5:57:00 AM
    This is really good, I could feel the breeze at the end!

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