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Please Forgive Me

I’ve said I’m sorry many times
But you won’t accept my apology
I don’t know what I did wrong
Please forgive me

I never meant to say the things that I did
But I didn’t realize that until it was too late
I am asking for your forgiveness
Please don’t be filled with hate

Things aren’t going to get better
Things are just getting worse
I never meant to hurt you
Please hold onto these words

I loved you with every fiber in my body
But all you did was stomp on me
I used to have a heart but all you did was
Tear it apart

I am asking for your forgiveness
Do I have it yet?

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  1. Date: 3/1/2010 8:03:00 AM

    Sounds like perhaps both of you should forgive...but at the very least him! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 9:37:00 PM

    I'd say this deserves forgiveness! Nicely done, Destiny!

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 11:25:00 AM

    i think you should make this longer. at first i was captured by it and i coudlnt stop reading, but after a little while it lost its beautiful flow. consider it?

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 11:22:00 AM

    Lovely write here forgiveness lives in the heart Daniel thanks for your support

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 4:38:00 PM

    I hope forgiveness does come soon. Very nice empathetic poem. Nice writing. -Mike

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 7:49:00 AM

    I LOVE FORGIVING POETRY... I HAD TO READ IT AGAIN ...IT IS SAD ONE HAS TO ASK FOR FORGIVENESS.......I.T.

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 4:40:00 PM

    WOW MAYBE YOU NEED TO BE FORGIVEN..NICE NICE NICE...I.T.