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  1. Date: 5/17/2010 8:48:00 AM
    Such a good metaphor Burns. Unique yet Indistinguishable.

  1. Date: 4/13/2010 10:43:00 PM
    I have absolutely nothing to say that could possibly make this poem one iota better. Jesus CHRIST, Burns. Beautiful.

  1. Date: 4/13/2010 10:03:00 AM
    Very imressive write that you have penned in this one...Some use of alliteration and metaphoric language...Keep the creative pen flowing and awe us on soup with your talent...Welcome my friend to the world of poets...Sara

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 12:28:00 AM
    I can't tell you what it is about this work that makes me so attracted to it. Perhaps it's the idea that we are all rare in our own way. this one goes in my favourites..well done...Margaret

  1. Date: 2/11/2010 3:51:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Stuart. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 2:48:00 PM
    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..