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Master Engineer

Ear before radio
Eye  before television
Bird before plane
Migration before GPS
Brain before computer
Evolution or creation?

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    FRANK H.
    Date: 2/12/2013 12:36:00 AM
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    Or a lesser of two Gods.
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    Barbara J Henry
    Date: 12/19/2010 3:57:00 PM
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    Susan, What an attention getter! This one really makes its readers think: We have become so (too?) dependent upon technology. Barbara J. Henry
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    HONESTY OIMBO
    Date: 11/16/2010 8:04:00 AM
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    it is creation and not evolution
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    David Smalling
    Date: 9/17/2010 3:46:00 AM
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    The master's design, alone created the human mind, no accident could these contrast find, and if God created the unseen, then why not also the seen? Thanks for the kind thoughts on my poem, I felt so special to be honored by you, one love
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 9/9/2010 9:19:00 AM
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    Ah, this brings a good question, I do love the way you put "ear before radio" and so on, it shows what was before what was invented or created, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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    Gert W. Knop
    Date: 3/31/2010 5:58:00 AM
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    Yes, Susan, evolution or creation, that is the question. But without brains no computers, without birds, no planes etc. So nature is alway one step ahead! I liked very much reading this poem. Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your comments...Happy Easter! Gert
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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 2/28/2010 6:17:00 PM
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    I am sure I read this poem again. Well enjoyed reading again....Loved it
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    Laura Spears
    Date: 2/28/2010 2:30:00 PM
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    Interesting thoughts about electronics and industry. I notice you did not say ear before music or eye before beauty. Thanks for your comments on my work. Happy Writing
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 2/18/2010 8:21:00 AM
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    This is always a question. Were we created or did we evolve. God Bless Phyl
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    Jay Loveless
    Date: 2/16/2010 9:08:00 AM
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    Hmmm, i really love this one. Makes me think a little (: xo Rain
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    Jessica Arteaga
    Date: 2/14/2010 9:29:00 AM
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    this is good, were we created or did we elvove, heck why not both creation through evolution, good interesting poem that gives lots of though. Let's hope we don't evolve to create or fall hmmm
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    John Beam
    Date: 2/14/2010 12:46:00 AM
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    thanks for comment but I am not that smart just loved to share what the Word of God has done in my heart
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    Robyn Blauw
    Date: 2/13/2010 8:54:00 PM
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    Wow, thats a clever poem. Makes you think. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Hugss
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    cecil hickman
    Date: 2/12/2010 9:41:00 PM
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    an amazingly written piece that shows the wisdom and imagination that you hold,,it is amazing the technology we have encountered, but as well we should remember and not cloud our senses or lose them for if that were to happen,,all sensitivity would be gone,,Thank you for your thought provoking words written within,,,Blessings..cecil
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    Hai Au Chu
    Date: 2/12/2010 4:03:00 PM
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    Chicken or the egg, huh. I like poems that make me think. nice one.
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 2/12/2010 2:17:00 PM
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    Wow, this is really clever, Susan. And it gives us so much to think about. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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    Anna T
    Date: 2/12/2010 1:34:00 PM
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    No just kidding, I really enjoyed reading your poetry!! Keep writing:)
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    Anna T
    Date: 2/12/2010 1:27:00 PM
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    The title says it all.
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    Kim Hilliker
    Date: 2/12/2010 12:56:00 PM
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    Clever and thought provoking. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
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    FATHIMA DAWOOD
    Date: 2/11/2010 11:52:00 PM
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    interesting conceptual thinking - nice one!!! Thank You for commenting on my poetry. Peace Always Fathima
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    isa mahrie
    Date: 2/11/2010 9:40:00 AM
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    very interesting poem ..... Evolution .... gr8 night read :)
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    Michael Harman
    Date: 2/10/2010 3:46:00 PM
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    Creation Evolving? Towards unity and diversity. Love and acceptance of others.

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    William Arthur Tell
    Date: 2/10/2010 4:53:00 AM
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    This is very simply yet powerful. You could have made 3 poems from these thoughts. One on the 5 senses. One on Animal Life versus Technology + The Obvious Creation challengeing Evolution. I would have ended it with Creation before Evolution - a little more Intense that Way - but still captivating for sure. Thanks for the Comments on my Poem. I can't even believe it was discovered so fast - lol. Well I hope you have a Great Day and Enjoy your Valentines to the Fullest. I will read all your poems.
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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 2/9/2010 9:07:00 AM
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    TODAYS DAYS ARE ALL ABOUT EVOLUTION. NICE READING YOUR POEM.I JUST HAVE TO SAY WOW. ALSO I'LL BE THINKING OF OUR CREATION FIRST...THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY POEM ....I.T.
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    Danny Nunn
    Date: 2/9/2010 4:56:00 AM
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    You got this one pegged right, good write..thanks on Coyotes...yes in a pack are a nasty bunch..thanks Danny
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    farah chamma
    Date: 2/9/2010 2:05:00 AM
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    Wonderful! Concise yet very deep. Thought-provoking. Always, Farah
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    Lynette Chachere
    Date: 2/8/2010 8:11:00 PM
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    Hmm. you have me thinking about that. -Always Lynette
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 2/8/2010 4:55:00 PM
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    A powerhouse poem from u Susan.. imaginative and ingenious.. great title too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

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    Daniel Cheeseman
    Date: 2/8/2010 4:23:00 AM
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    Liked this alot Susan, makes you wonder Thanks Daniel
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 2/8/2010 4:15:00 AM
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    Great thought provoking write that you have presented here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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