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DREAM OF SAILING

06 February 2010


Dream of Sailing
By: Noel N. Villarosa


Never sailed on a three-masted sailboat
Where it bustles to find a smooth wave
Where the wind is its engine
And heels above at the wave’s commotion

Feel the quiver of disappearing in a trough
Then mightily emerging to open water
To stand atop the mast
And feels the strong wind to drown my breath

It fills me with gobsmacked
To sail past on the Seine river
Or ride to a replica of Argo
And sails in the famous canal of Athens

To smell the ocean mist
To rein in the wind for propulsion
And touch the boat sails as it moved downwind
Hear the recoil of bow wave along the hull

The beauty and grandeur of a sailboat
Only to picture, my dream is outlined
The anchor never lifted, the mast never stretched
Only message in the bottle, keeps floating on bluewater with my dream of sailing


Honorable Mention to Carol Brown's If My Dream Could Come True: 3/18/2010

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  1. Date: 12/22/2010 12:09:00 AM

    by the way, what is gobsmacked (in stanza three?)

  1. Date: 12/22/2010 12:05:00 AM

    A belated congrats on this one I never had the pleasure to read before today. wow, it was even more deserving of a top ten place if you ask me. What great writing from you here, Noel! wonderful imagery! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 4:36:00 PM

    Congrats Noel on your winning poem and placement in the Dreams Come True contest.. a most wonderful write and win for u to be proud of and so enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 1:59:00 PM

    Oh how i desire to be in your dream on this amazing trip > many congratulations on your win in Carol's wonderful contest Noel >> James

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 12:13:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery to share your dream. Sounds like a peaceful venture to me. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 12:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Noel in my contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/17/2010 12:40:00 PM

    Dear Noel, YOU bring YOUR Dream to Life in this Extraordinary Pen Can I go with YOU as YOUR First Mate Excellence in POETRY A Crown of Laurel YOU Have earned Keep the Magic of POETRY coming Thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 11:52:00 PM

    Welcome Noel,great imagery here in this poe,.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and comments today

  1. Date: 2/7/2010 4:03:00 AM

    Great dream that you have dreamed. Dreams can come true. Keep penning the dreams. Welcome to soup.Sara

  1. Date: 2/6/2010 1:39:00 PM

    Nice dream

  1. Date: 2/6/2010 3:31:00 AM

    Creative write I enjoyed very much.