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tabb-PRODIGAL

Out of error,a fear,
             Then a lie;
Out of regret,a farewell,
             Then a sigh;
Out of parting,a change,
              Then a trial;
Out of reunion,a relief
             Graceful smile.

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  1. Date: 2/6/2010 9:40:00 AM

    Glad that prodigal came back. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and enjoying my flights of fantasy. Escapism is great until someone yells Gran or Sar....Sara

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 8:57:00 PM

    I'm stupefyingly speechless!!! Superb piece, Brian! One more for my favs! Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 4:13:00 PM

    I like you. I love your contests. You are versatile to the Nth degree. That's a great trait to have. Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 2:23:00 PM

    Wonderful words in this Imagism portrait of tabb-Prodigal... the graceful smile shows the happy ending.. enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 11:07:00 AM

    Youe pen seems to be flowing with such ease today my friend. Thank you for posting and sharing your work with us again today. Always a pleasure to read Brian. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 8:03:00 AM

    Lots of interesting thoughts in this one, Brian. (I'm probably not in the contest you mentioned because I may be helping her. haha) Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 5:13:00 AM

    I like it, I don't think I understand it, but I like it

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 3:06:00 AM

    Wow, so few words saying and portraying volumes. Excellent write.

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 12:47:00 AM

    Nailed it , again Brian . Will this also apply to Capt.Terry ? , or would that be a " Bridge " too far ???? ....

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 12:33:00 AM

    Well done!