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Defeated

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Defeated

I would walk across the desert 
To defeat my enemy
I would lie here in the darkness 
With your picture next to me
You don’t know ho much I miss you
You don’t know what I would do
Why won’t this pain go away
It just gets worse everyday
Maybe someday you will see
Just how much you meant to me
I thought I knew you well
But my heart you had to sell
People tell me to say never
I now know there’s no forever
I guess you what you said to me was true after all
When you told me that our relationship would fall

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  1. Date: 2/4/2010 1:27:00 PM
    Breakups are the worst

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 12:39:00 PM
    Sad love loss write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara