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  1. Date: 6/3/2010 4:55:00 AM

    Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are great.! love Leke

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 1:41:00 PM

    Sami, your poems speak with great articulation about a horrible predicament...life with wars and rumors of wars. Threats, murders, fear. I am sorry that so many people face these stresses. Pray. Keep the faith. Cherish life. Focus on Heavenly Father. Never give up. Pray for peace. That's about all that can be done. I pray for your safety. Thank you for sharing. (I enjoyed it again.) Thanks for commenting on my poetry. Lovingly, Dane Ann.

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 11:54:00 AM

    You're great creating mood... the prevailing emotional tone in this poem is not only credible but also compelling. Very well written, Sami. "Hell is just around the corner."...yes, sadly it is. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/6/2010 12:34:00 PM

    Powerful message: Susan

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 9:08:00 AM

    THIS IS A VERY GRIPPING POEM, Sami. It is well written, keeps the readers attention and in the end, the reader wants to help, but alas, there is no justice and help no longer works. Very strong, well written poem. To my favorites it goes. (soup mail)

  1. Date: 2/8/2010 6:46:00 AM

    A beauty Sami....I adore it.... Especially the last two lines... ALways, Farah Check out my blog