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Insomnia

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Below is the poem entitled Insomnia which was written by poet Susan Palli. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Insomnia

Blank mind 
Far behind
Brain gone
Just a pawn

Can’t think
Only blink
Need sleep
But I weep

Then I pray
It’s Okay
Peace arrives
Tears subside.



I was in a depressive state.

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 11:15:00 PM
    Congrats Susan on your win.... Cheers

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:46:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, and I really liked this poem

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Hi Susan,. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 8:01:00 AM
    i kno how u feel

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 4:27:00 PM
    weight of the world in your heart and your song

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 6:44:00 AM
    cute . this should have been in the new style contest. john

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 5:00:00 AM
    sound poem with rich literary forms.

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 4:50:00 PM
    Susan, I can so relate. My friends and family know that my insomnia brings them many prayers. Thank you for your comment on my verse. Jerri

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 10:54:00 PM
    Thank you for your sweet comment on my poem :). I really like the message in this one as well as how it's written. I've read some of you other poems as well and they are really, really good.

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 5:41:00 PM
    I really like the message in this one. Well done. I see you haven't posted a poem in awhile. Hope you'll have more coming soon. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good week! Karen

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 2:54:00 PM
    Hopefully you've got a good sleep, Susan! Nice poem. And thanks for your comment. Have a great Sunday...Gert

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 7:25:00 AM
    nice poetry, keep up the good work, thanks for stopping by to read and comment

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 9:40:00 AM
    Nice one !

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 8:15:00 PM
    Simple style but brings the point home -hope you get some sleep

  1. Date: 3/10/2010 4:32:00 PM
    I already read this poem I just hed to read again . I am experiencing insomnia just like your poem. I will post this one to my favorite.

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 4:25:00 PM
    Been there done that. Nice write.

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 9:19:00 AM
    happens to the best of us....

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 8:31:00 AM
    I also post absolutely meaningless self-publicising comments which give no input at all. Well done for having a poem namesaked with mine. Maybe next time you could post a comment actually worth receiving.

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 1:33:00 PM
    I've been thinking about writing a poem about insomnia so was drawn to read yours. Great job describing so susccinctly what happens in the night! It seems from all the posts that many of us who write poetry don't sleep so well. The up side for me is that many of my poem ideas come to me once I calm down and find that place of peace. Thanks for commenting on my Moon poem. Krista

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 4:53:00 AM
    BEAUTIFUL!

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