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Insomnia

Blank mind 
Far behind
Brain gone
Just a pawn

Can’t think
Only blink
Need sleep
But I weep

Then I pray
It’s Okay
Peace arrives
Tears subside.



I was in a depressive state.

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:17:00 AM

    love the simplicity of this poem. belated congrats =)

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 11:15:00 PM

    Congrats Susan on your win.... Cheers

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:46:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, and I really liked this poem

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:42:00 PM

    Hi Susan,. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 8:01:00 AM

    i kno how u feel

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 4:27:00 PM

    weight of the world in your heart and your song

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 6:44:00 AM

    cute . this should have been in the new style contest. john

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 5:00:00 AM

    sound poem with rich literary forms.

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 4:50:00 PM

    Susan, I can so relate. My friends and family know that my insomnia brings them many prayers. Thank you for your comment on my verse. Jerri

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 10:54:00 PM

    Thank you for your sweet comment on my poem :). I really like the message in this one as well as how it's written. I've read some of you other poems as well and they are really, really good.

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 5:41:00 PM

    I really like the message in this one. Well done. I see you haven't posted a poem in awhile. Hope you'll have more coming soon. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good week! Karen

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 2:54:00 PM

    Hopefully you've got a good sleep, Susan! Nice poem. And thanks for your comment. Have a great Sunday...Gert

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 7:25:00 AM

    nice poetry, keep up the good work, thanks for stopping by to read and comment

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 9:40:00 AM

    Nice one !

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 8:15:00 PM

    Simple style but brings the point home -hope you get some sleep

  1. Date: 3/10/2010 4:32:00 PM

    I already read this poem I just hed to read again . I am experiencing insomnia just like your poem. I will post this one to my favorite.

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 4:25:00 PM

    Been there done that. Nice write.

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 9:19:00 AM

    happens to the best of us....

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 8:31:00 AM

    I also post absolutely meaningless self-publicising comments which give no input at all. Well done for having a poem namesaked with mine. Maybe next time you could post a comment actually worth receiving.

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 1:33:00 PM

    I've been thinking about writing a poem about insomnia so was drawn to read yours. Great job describing so susccinctly what happens in the night! It seems from all the posts that many of us who write poetry don't sleep so well. The up side for me is that many of my poem ideas come to me once I calm down and find that place of peace. Thanks for commenting on my Moon poem. Krista

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 4:53:00 AM

    BEAUTIFUL!

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 2:58:00 AM

    I know this sensation, your poem comes to me as the tic-tac of a clock in the middle of the night... love it!

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 10:22:00 AM

    I have insomnia. There are nights I just don't sleep. I am sorry for your tears...

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 5:55:00 PM

    Very good. I like this one very much.

  1. Date: 2/20/2010 8:44:00 AM

    Hi Susan :)As I am tossing and turning and wishing that I was sleeping, and that's when I start praying and before you know it I am dreaming and then waking up again when the sun starts rising in the early morning, Susan I can relate to this poem so well especially when all I usually get is about four or five hours of sleep each night,Thank you again for sharing your gift in poetry with all of us here in poetry soup I thoroughly enjoyed my visit this morning,Have a fantastic day, Dean

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 11:57:00 PM

    WOW....very good poem! love it!

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 7:25:00 PM

    I LOVE IT ,I LOVE IT.AWESOME POEM. THAT IS DEFFINATELY ME... IRMA

  1. Date: 2/17/2010 12:37:00 PM

    this a good poem....and thanks for the comment its greatly appreciated

  1. Date: 2/17/2010 2:20:00 AM

    Clever / witty call , Susan .... HEY !!! Wake up , when I'm speaking . Ok , back to sleep , but NO snoring !!! ....

  1. Date: 2/16/2010 9:36:00 AM

    i love this (: nice work

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