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H.A.I.T.I.

Homes are destroyed
A terrible catastrophe leaves families without warmth or food
It shakes down poor children and takes their parents 
The survivors are struggling for another meal... and the beast,
It leaves utter devastation behind but echoes with its leftovers

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  1. Date: 3/4/2010 12:36:00 PM

    Great write but sad what happen, Donate money to HAITI to help out children with no food, family's without homes, and elderly on the street with no food or warmth.

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 12:16:00 PM

    Very descriptive and expressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 11:08:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Savannah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 4:16:00 PM

    Nice acrostic, it was sad and devastating. I haven't seen you in a while. Nice to see your work again...Raul

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 2:01:00 PM

    such a horrible thing that occured... wonderfully penned. ------Ell

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 12:29:00 PM

    Unbelievable tragedy. Well done