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rondel : The sit in silence .

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rondel : The sit in silence .

The  silence

And  the  antiseptic  air .

The sound  of  pain

In  that  dreaded  chair .

Your  jaw  now  dead

With  a  tongue  to  choke .

"RIGHT ! ,  you're  next  Seán " .

The  voice  that  broke

The  silence .





Inspired for Brian's rondel contest .

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:46:00 AM

    When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly exceptional Sean. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/17/2010 9:34:00 AM

    Loved it!

  1. Date: 2/16/2010 10:18:00 AM

    Congratulations Sean, on your success in Brian’s “A RONDEL” contest. It's nice to see you in the winners circle again with this amusing DENTAL poem. It's easy to see why you placed. You know I love your humor. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 2/13/2010 2:06:00 PM

    Great piece Sean, sets the scene to perfection. Congratulations. Déirdre

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 1:34:00 PM

    funny and sadd... enjoyed

  1. Date: 2/11/2010 3:48:00 PM

    Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your contest win to my other comment. This is such a creative poem. Well deserved honor. Enjoy! Karen

  1. Date: 2/11/2010 3:06:00 PM

    Cong .on your win..well deserved indeed..Charma:)

  1. Date: 2/11/2010 1:16:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win with this great Rondel. Thank you for your comments on my latest posting. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 2:04:00 PM

    Ouch.:).excellent work..indeed..good one--Charma

  1. Date: 2/6/2010 8:42:00 PM

    Jesus Sean for a sec I thought you were describing an interrogation................laugh! Brilliant!

  1. Date: 2/6/2010 3:23:00 PM

    This is awesome, Sean. Great line about the "antiseptic air." Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 11:06:00 PM

    Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Sean! Very well written indeed. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 12:41:00 AM

    They all start with a spring in their side-step Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 1:09:00 PM

    Glad I called it! congratulations! andrea

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 8:27:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest Sean. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 7:43:00 AM

    Congrats on your success in my contest Sean.Rgds Brian.My latest contest SPACES is now open

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 1:09:00 AM

    Very droll, the waitings the worst bit. I love it, I can just picture grinning dentist. good job...Margaret

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 1:08:00 PM

    AHHHH, (that's me, I can't talk in this chair!) I REALLY like this one. It's so short but so vivid. Good luck. i hope you place with this! lUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 12:13:00 PM

    Wishing you the very best in the contest Sean. It looks like a winner to me. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 11:35:00 AM

    Good use of imagery for a thought provoking poem. I like the way you use conversation towards the end. Using your name in the poem also makes it feel personal. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 7:29:00 AM

    Sean thanks for supporting my contest.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 6:52:00 AM

    Going to the dentist can be a painful experience but reading your poetry Sean is a highlight for one's day ... witty and fun..hope the experience was too just a little..luv.. Linda-Marie..