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Shiny Shiny

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Shiny Shiny

Kiss the rain
Tear me through

I awake today
I am pulled in again today
I loathe today
Is this lonesome?

Unmarked grave/ visions of an unmarked grave

Kiss the rain tear me through

I am jonesing  on the edge of your tin roof...
waiting, sweating, dying, crying,loving,living
 for something new


spade spiv spinning belle
Alone we lust
Alone we whisper
Alone Alone Alone is all I have

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  1. Date: 2/9/2010 7:01:00 PM
    Very Gothic!

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 5:25:00 PM
    Interesting and sad write that you have persented here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 10:46:00 AM
    It has been a pleasure to read your poem today Kalonji. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol