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Surrendered to my Love

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Surrendered to my Love

I searched for you night and day,
My lungs gave out and breath gave way.
It was endless in miles and vast in count.
 
The treasures in measure are heavy in amount.
Piece by piece I seek to find,
Gathering myself with a soul and mind!
 
I prayed for you day and night,
My heart gave way and my feelings gave out.
I was surrendered to my love without a doubt!
 
 
© Copyright: Ann Rich   2006

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  1. Date: 2/2/2010 5:11:00 AM
    I get an idea of what you are saying, but I'm not entirely sure, I like the way you've switched the order of the 2nd and 8th lines - THnaks for sharing