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  1. Date: 2/18/2010 7:42:00 PM
    What I see in your poems, you write just how you feel or are feeling..this is good, stick to your guns, good write..thanks for Cops..No I am just an old cowboy that likes to write.and 30 years on the Mexican border with corrupt Judges, Lawyers and cops that I do not like..thanks Danny

  1. Date: 2/10/2010 9:24:00 AM
    Dear Lynette, Very intriging I see my the Comments that we are looking for a sequel YOUR Clever write draws the reader through the POEM Excellent subject Matter SUPERB ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 2/6/2010 12:04:00 AM
    Wow...I love this story and want to know what the note said!!! lol Marty

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 2:51:00 PM
    Hey, Lynette, you would not believe how long I've been here this afternoon.I better get off. Gotta make my husband his dinner finally!!! YIKES. And then back to work. I am there both morning and night. I spend WAY too much time here to be remotely like the woman I address in my homemaker poem! Thanks so much for reading my poetry today. Luv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 7:02:00 AM
    Lynette, Great story, great title, kiddo!! Keep those poems coming and stick to your goal!! This would be an enchanting tale for you to write up as a short story and finsh . I want to hear how it ended, what the note said!! I enjoyed this alot. Luv,Andrea

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 6:33:00 AM
    Very alluring write in this one. The story grabbed me and drew me in. Someone used the line on me a married woman and he knew me so he knew that I was married and I returned with the I am not responsible for my looks it came from my parents(but really God who knitted me together in my mother's womb). On my poem "The Bucket" it is really metaphoric or allegoric in nature. It is about going after things and not nuturing our spirit. Same as my featured poem that I had no idea about it being ".SK