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Ripples of Pain

I sit in sadness,
wondering why i feel
like all my wounds
inside me won't heal
the pain is like water
the ripples never stop
they crash against my soul
beating at the barriers till
they flow over the top

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  1. Date: 10/10/2010 12:49:00 PM

    really good write thank you duncan

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 11:37:00 AM

    Sad write that is greatly interspersed with metaphoric language. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara