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Fidelity

Can you imagine how faithful Job was?
He didn’t know why he was tested, because
he was totally ignorant of  Satan’s insistence.
This manslayer could harm him even at a distance.


This rebellious angel wanted to believe,
that if he took away everything, God--- Job would leave.
Then, as he remain faithful even though all was taken,
the devil stole his health,  to see if God he’d forsaken.

As if that weren’t  enough, ---what an insult,
his so called friends said he was at fault.
In all his distresses, Job did not give up.
His integrity was proven without any doubt.

After a time, for his “friends”  he implored,
then God blessed him more than he had before.
Today, Satan’s tactics still  haven’t changed,
therefore, in God’s love, we try to remain.

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  1. Date: 10/1/2010 1:29:00 PM

    Susan, thanks for your consistency to conviction, may you be blessed with every write.

  1. Date: 7/2/2010 9:05:00 AM

    Nice write! Thanks for reading my poetry.

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 10:20:00 AM

    How true this poem is? When life is difficult and gets you down you just think about the life of Job and it should help pick you up again !!!

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 7:20:00 PM

    Job was always a favorite of mine too Susan..thankxx so very much for sharing this poem and for your lovely comments on my poetry reads tonight.. very welcome and appreciated... in Christ, luv..Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 7:50:00 PM

    I think about him all the time.

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 2:33:00 PM

    We discussed this today at church, how Satan and his demons are out there to test us. Good job with Job and rhyming his story in this tale.

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 6:12:00 PM

    Satan has come to kill, steal, and destroy but Jesus came that we may have life and have it more abundantly. I just love that .. You have done a great job on this book from the "Bible". Keep the faith pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 4:42:00 PM

    By your own acceptance so are you challenged and far as Job...in your mind...as did he in the eyes of his god....being good is its own reward! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 9:30:00 AM

    Good telling of JOb, lovely lady!

  1. Date: 2/16/2010 12:41:00 PM

    Job's struggle well penned here in this Rhyme, Susan! Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your comment...Gert

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 5:56:00 PM

    I REALLY ENJOYED THIS WRITE.......IT REMINDS THAT THIS JESUS WALK ISN'T EASY BUT THE FATHER GIVES US THE POWER TO OVERCOME IN ANY SITUATION IN LIFE SPIRITUALLY AND NATURALLY.......

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 12:54:00 AM

    Glad I can confess the Lord Jesus come in the flesh all points as we are yet without sin and he has given us an expected end keep writing fare ye well

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 5:10:00 PM

    Love this poem from one of the great books in the Old Testament, Susan... Verses 4-6 in the last chapter are my favorite verses from the Bible - Tim

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 1:35:00 PM

    Great tribute to one of my favorite bible stories.

  1. Date: 2/7/2010 1:40:00 PM

    Amen Sister Susan.. beautiful piece on my favorite person in the Bible, Job.. years ago I wrote a poem entitled Job and Me.. going through crisis beyond belief.. but I hung in there like Job and today its all glory to God... wonderful way u have written this "beauty".. easy to read and absorb.. many believers on site too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 2/6/2010 5:10:00 AM

    There`s nothing to add but to agree with those who have written their kind comments on your profound poem below. And keep on writing your rhymed lines, you`re getting away with it. Good luck! Thanks for your comment. Oleg

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 4:04:00 PM

    This is a keeper. A nice retelling of what many of us need to hear more of. Thank you very much. I appreciate it and my loving wife does even more. Regards, Gerard

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 8:36:00 PM

    great write on this story . well penned Susan!

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 1:30:00 PM

    Great poem and great conclusion! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 12:23:00 PM

    Susan, Reading about Job in the bible left a lasting impression on me and your poem reminded me that no matter how bad things get, we can endure with faith in divine love. A wonderful poem. Love, Connie

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 10:41:00 AM

    Excellent words herein. Job is one of my favorite, "perfect" men. He stayed strong even when life was so bad that he wanted to die. Very nice poetry. (soup mail)

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 12:34:00 PM

    I love how you brought up the fact that even in his complete misery, Job still implored God for the sake of his friends. How difficult it must be to think of others in one's time of greatest distress. Great message for fidelity. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 10:46:00 AM

    This is great Susan. I found it because you commented on my poem this morning. Thank you. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 10:04:00 AM

    Great tribute to your faith and "Biblical" knowledge. Yes, Satan hasn't changed good topic. I love the line in Job that says I know that my redeemer lives and on this earth one day he will stand. This is probably the oldest scripture in the "Bible" way back then before Christ he knew. I find this wonderful. Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 2/1/2010 9:02:00 AM

    Beautifully penned. Pls comment Red&Blue... thankfully. Wishing you all the best.

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 5:01:00 PM

    Job is one of my favorite stories in the Bible, how we all get tested, great write..thanks on The Tracker..the poem is reality..how they are winning the drug war and what the media wants the public ti see...is fantasy..Danny

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 9:59:00 AM

    An excellent poem about Job's faith, which survived every test. You give the reader inspiration to maintain faith in the face of adversity. A great entry for the faith contest, Susan. Wishing you luck! Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 8:40:00 AM

    We do indeed Susan.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments today

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 5:11:00 AM

    Beautiful sentiment! Jeralynn

  1. Date: 1/31/2010 5:03:00 AM

    Very much inspired and well deserved words. Loved it.

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