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" Raul "

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" Raul "

  1  " Sad Reality "
        So " Compelling ; and Profound "   ( Raul )
               ( MIATIANNA )   

   2  With my Heart Softened
       By eyes, see Pride in her eyes
       Princess of Haiti       ( HG )

Dedicated to my " Senryu Sensei " Raul Moreno "

  Author's Note : The First two lines in the First Senryu are " Raul's" Words "
   { I added the first ( So ) } In a comment to my POEM " MIATIANNA "

                      The Second Senryu is my Response
 
      
       

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  1. Date: 1/31/2010 10:56:00 AM
    An awesome dedication to an awesome poet.HG, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 1/30/2010 5:22:00 PM
    I like that title for Raul, Senryu Sensei!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2010 3:38:00 PM
    HG, it's a pleasure that you quote anything of mine, feel free my friend...Raul

  1. Date: 1/30/2010 3:06:00 AM
    Nice tribute to Raul.wherever i go,i shall always think Of Raul as a guy of few words,yet his words are wisdom,his friendship is true,a good listener,and a Haiku/Senryu Master, Raul could feel this sad reality in his comment,and your sensitive heart appreciated how he felt..bravo..Charma

  1. Date: 1/29/2010 10:01:00 PM
    A great dedication to a fine poet! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/29/2010 7:33:00 PM
    Your creativity is ablaze, nice work HG as always...Raul