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Her hair is rich and 
the crown of my dynasty.

Her eyes are angelic, giving light
to all dark places in my life.

Her lips are like a rose flower,
so beautiful and alluring.

In her face I have I have found the tales of Cinderella manifest itself.

Her head graciously and delicately
placed on her neck.
The connection to her gorgeous body.

Her breast so firm and strong
Beholding it is glorious,
Touching it is heaven.

Who says angels are not dimpled?

Her hands holds her magic.
A touch of her hand 
and every strand of hair in me stands straight.

Her thigh is as sweet as honey
Sweeter than honeycomb
With heavenly legs to grace the thigh.

All in all, my fair angel, 
you are way out of this world, and yet,
amongst us you have pitched your tent.

An angel you are 
yet, you do things like us
then i realize how much a blessing you are to this world and me.

I was shocked when i realized the greatest
When I discovered you weren't meant for the world at large
You were meant just for me!

Well, wouldn't anyone be jealous of this I have found?
...did I hear anyone say I ain't lucky?

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  1. Date: 3/2/2010 4:23:00 AM
    Great tribute to the one that you love...I know that she really appreciated the write. Keep the passionate and romantic pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 9:05:00 AM
    this is a beautiful poem and any girl would be happy to have someone write a poem for her but a poem like this, is a real gift! so carefully and elegantly written, i think you are both lucky:) and this a great piece written with skill and love! Jo

  1. Date: 2/26/2010 5:37:00 PM
    a happy man! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/2/2010 3:41:00 PM
    Wow, with a pure heart too, She must be unusual. passionate write. -Always Lynette

  1. Date: 1/30/2010 5:30:00 PM
    I think she must really be an angel, Crown. You had some great lines in this poem.One I really liked:Her head graciously and delicately placed on her neck. and also each strand of hair standing straight. A unique way to say it and very interesting. I could go on an on. I just love those images! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/29/2010 12:35:00 PM
    What a lovely tribute to this woman who carries such perfection..Charma

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 4:53:00 PM
    Great write, Ayomikun! And you are lucky! Be good to each other! Welcome to PS and thanks for sharing this with us. Keep writing and go read the works of others so they can in turn come read your poems! Peace, Audrey