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  1. Date: 2/24/2010 11:34:00 AM
    Thank you for the comment,I enjoyed reading this poem as well. About my caps, thank you for the heads up. At times I just want to write my poems fast .I do not take my time....Yes I know it is hard to understand...IRMA

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 7:37:00 AM
    i loved the imagery and expression. i really liked the middle lines the best and i lovesd this poem because it reminds me of my step dad, he used to work a job ( i dont remember what) where he would bring me home these fossilized muscle shells and i thought they were so great it seems they are my rose!=)Jo

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 7:47:00 AM
    Great descriptive and expressiveness penned here in these lines with some metaphoric language. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara