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Rose Rocks

I’m here to seek a special rose,
Won’t someone tell me where it grows?
On red earth cracked and blistered so?
Where muddy sluggish rivers flow?
Planted on the trail of tears?
Were roses petrified by fears?

Or did they grow in clay so long that clay grew into them?
I’ll search until I find this rose, this dusky flower gem

I did search long but rather sought,
Than find a rose that could be bought,
Such rapturous joy nothing could match,
When I stumbled on a patch,
My eye seized little faster than hand,
What grew upon the red clay sand,
And now at last, I have my treasure,
Roses that will perish never,
For me to look at and to share,
And show to people everywhere

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(A month spent in Oklahoma inspired this. I wrote the first part before I went searching at 
Lake Stanley Draper. I wrote the rest when I came back. I did find some! They are so cool!) 

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  1. Date: 2/24/2010 11:34:00 AM

    Thank you for the comment,I enjoyed reading this poem as well. About my caps, thank you for the heads up. At times I just want to write my poems fast .I do not take my time....Yes I know it is hard to understand...IRMA

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 7:37:00 AM

    i loved the imagery and expression. i really liked the middle lines the best and i lovesd this poem because it reminds me of my step dad, he used to work a job ( i dont remember what) where he would bring me home these fossilized muscle shells and i thought they were so great it seems they are my rose!=)Jo

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 7:47:00 AM

    Great descriptive and expressiveness penned here in these lines with some metaphoric language. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara