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My name ? ..Exaggerated

my name ..sounds so anxious

known by many ..exaggerated ..

a hunter ..trying to survive

now look through my eyes 

wonder why ? is feeding a crime ?

orca is good ...killer whale ... a lie

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  1. Date: 1/29/2010 1:12:00 PM

    The last line sums the question up. It's just feeding. NIce work...Raul

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 8:44:00 PM

    Yes, the orca is to the killer whale as the lion is to the antelope! Great write, Marco. Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 10:19:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Marco. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 4:18:00 AM

    They look like a gentle giant with their coloring and the grace with which they move through the water. I am glad that you chose this topic. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara