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MEMORY OF YOU

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MEMORY OF YOU

I know I don't visit like I should
But, please don't think its cause I don't care,
My heart is still mourning and hurting
Knowing your all alone lying there.

Your free of pain with eternal life
I know in your memory I should rejoice,
But, its not the same without you here
I'd give anything to hear your voice.

One more time to see your smile
Even to feel your gentle touch,
Hearing you laugh from deep down
Oh, this and more I miss so much.

The scuffle as your walking by
I can hear you coughing at night,
Feel your presence through the house
Your assuring me everything is alright.

So, untill one day when I'm called home
The heavenly angels come down for me,
I'll continue to keep you within my heart
While I keep replaying your memory.

Memory of my brother, Matt. R.I.P. 2/5/69-3/19/09

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  1. Date: 4/15/2010 10:12:00 AM
    Well done Jodie, Im sure your Bro is in good hands today and from now on .I know the pain to lose a sister or a brother and time alone can ease the pain .Good Write .

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 5:20:00 AM
    The loss of someone as close as a loved brother is a very hard thing...My symphathy goes out to you..It does get better and the memories become sweeter...Keep the expressive and emotive pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 11:34:00 PM
    Sorry for you great loss Jodie, I relate to this style of writing. I write funeral poems full time. You did an wonderful job, I'm sure Matt is smiling and enjoying this poem...Raul

  1. Date: 1/27/2010 8:32:00 AM
    I'm so sorry for your loss, Jodie. Our loved ones remain in our hearts forever. Matt was probably watching over you when you wrote this beautiful dedication. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/27/2010 7:42:00 AM
    So sorry for your loss Jodie. Yes keep him in your heart until you meet again. Thank you for sharing this dear one. Love, Carol