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  1. Date: 2/23/2010 12:25:00 PM
    that is sad but a good write,and you can't force love, but i really liked this it was uniquely written with the o babes and stuff, and i aalso liked your metaphors well it's a simili i guess but the stobe light one was good. good write here! Jo

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 11:08:00 AM
    Sad personality traits that you have given yourself here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara