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House of spiders

House of spiders

My empty house, my soul is full of spiders,
No way to go for covering my empty day,
No will to overfill the ash of my reminders,
To see the thread of grass or bright my stay,
Come here my hope, don`t let my soul away!!!

Don`t punish me for my mistake and for my sin,
I am a suffering daughter in her blindly body`s falling,
Reveal me your will, as I know my God could clean
My mud and wounds for come to life after collapsing,
Only by Your help and love, My Lord, I`m over passing!!!

As now I`m the chaff, don`t throw me in that fire burning,
I`ll try to change myself and understand your warning,
And my last breath for your wisdom advice is praying.
However, disappointed and comfortless, my days I`m counting,
Light and peace, Your ever love - are all that I`m wanting.

What to do, my God, for You to give alms to my heart?
As a helpless, I pray for my salvation and soul`s good part,
To straighten my steps and fight against bad devil art.
As I am in a dusty room within an old inn`s malicious chart,
Wipe up my tears, Lord! I`m overwhelmed by my hungry heart.

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  1. Date: 1/28/2010 6:56:00 PM
    Thanks for your comments on my poem. I will try for this book Alike and Asparagus` (fiction) and if I can get hold of it I will read it. Best wishes and love Ravindra

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 6:52:00 PM
    Very heart touching write. The last line is very beautiful. A nice Prayer. love Ravindra

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 11:00:00 AM
    I especially like the last line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Write us how you fill that hungry heart. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 1/28/2010 9:29:00 AM
    Very heartfelt poem, dear, and much thanks for your reading my poem. I wish you well with your published book. I have several chapbooks on sale at Shadowpoetry.com. Rarely do people buy them. But I wish you luck with yours! LUv, andrea