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Goodbye

Goodbye
I've left you
No more violence
Battered for the last time
Goodbye







***** Written for my daughter. She left her husband this weekend. Yay! I'm so proud of her.

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  1. Date: 6/29/2010 6:31:00 PM

    WOW. So strong. Good for your daughter! No one deserves to be treated like that! Good luck to her, and you as well! Much love, RW

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 5:35:00 PM

    good for her and hope she finds someone who will treat her how she is supposed to be treated. Good Luck and God Bless!

  1. Date: 1/30/2010 3:06:00 PM

    Kimberly, One must have courage and faith which is there for the asking. An empowering message for those who will listen. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 1/26/2010 7:53:00 PM

    Good mesage on a sensitive subject.

  1. Date: 1/26/2010 5:22:00 PM

    May your daughter continue her healing walk in good courage and faith. You are a wonderful mother my friend,she is blessed to have your support. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments on my poetry, I truly appreciate it :-) God's Love and Many Blessings to you and yours, always, Adell

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 9:04:00 AM

    just stopping by to say good morning and hope you have a great day.

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 8:59:00 AM

    Kimberley, I pray that she will heal both physically and emotionally very quickly. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 1:24:00 AM

    Kimberly, I hope she stays away. Too often, women are somehow "hooked" into the abuse. Rally around and show your love. And pray that she finds strength elsewhere and stays out of the abuse. I'll include her in my prayers. Nice cinqu. (And thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry.) Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 1/25/2010 1:14:00 AM

    It is good that your daughter has your support Kimberly. Many women in the same situation have no one to turn to. I wish her all the best...Margaret

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 9:01:00 PM

    That must have taken a lot of courage. my heart goes out to her, she's been through a lot from what you tell me in such few yet unmistakably horrible images. I'd be proud too, it takes guts to see the truth for what it is...thanks for sharing and please send her my best if appropriate. -Yoni.

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 10:29:00 AM

    good for her, sorry for the bad hand in life.

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 10:22:00 AM

    So sad your duaghter had to go through this. It is wonderful to hear she had the courage to leave. I hope she heals with time. Best wishes in the contest with your poem. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 9:37:00 AM

    greta write and great kid hope she picked up a shovel and hit him over head lol just got out of same thing but the guy died on me so words were nil in end and I was left with peace thanks for sharign and for kind comments on my poem

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 8:39:00 AM

    GOOD poem and GOOD for her!! It must be so hard, especially if there are any kids involved. My son is a lawyer now and sees this all the time but he tells me the women won't face the guy in court, so nothing ever gets resloved. It is so important to take action. And it requres great bravery. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 7:46:00 AM

    Well, that was the best your daughte could do! Violence is never a way to solve conflicts. I do hope your daughter feels better now. Good luck for the contest! And thank you for your comment...Kind regards, Gert

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 7:19:00 AM

    And God will protect her in her decision to live her life free of violence.. congrats to her and u ... as a Mom I totally understand the crisis u both face... I have many spiritual poems of my almost 600 posted so please continue to read to be uplifted if they help u... thankxxx always for your special and kind comments on my poetry.. happy Sunday... blessings with luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 4:41:00 AM

    If this if about domestic violence, hurrah. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 12:17:00 AM

    Thank you for supporting my contest Kimberely.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 11:22:00 PM

    this si amazing how much emotion you ut in there through those words...nice poem love it...nikki

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 11:07:00 PM

    Hi Kimberly. Well done Cingku. Very emotional in a few words. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 10:28:00 PM

    Nice, very nice, Kimberly! Good luck in Brian's Contest. Ruben.