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A Rusted Key

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A Rusted Key

A rusted key has broken ---
It's trapped inside a lock ---
Because the metal of it's being,
has simply lost it's stock ---
No amount of blasphemy 
or acting quite demented ---
Will repair this fractured relic ---
Any more then the hypocrite, 
who prays to be repented.

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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Congratulations Sheol(interseting name) on your winning spot xx

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Congrats Sheol on your winning poemxxx

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 6:29:00 PM
    I super love this Sheol, love the relic you made of age... , you did well in Susan's "AGING" contest. Congratulations:-) take care~LINDA

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 3:31:00 PM
    A different take on the contest an honorable win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:24:00 PM
    So so true , nice analogy great write.

  1. Date: 10/13/2010 1:37:00 PM
    straight forward and striking force

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 5:59:00 AM
    Saw this tittle had to read one more, On this all i will say you are good with comparing life situations with a strange and enjoyable metaphoric way,,,cool,, have a nice day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 1:37:00 PM
    Quite a profound message, Sheol. Like the way you compared the "rusted key" to the hypocrite. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 5:37:00 PM
    wow good one and so true!!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 7:17:00 AM
    Great thought in this one, Sheol! It's kind of rhymed too! Have a nice day! andrea